Friday, June 24, 2011

good plot for a movie? deleting in ten minutes.?

so RACHEL (17) and her boyfriend JAD (17) and friends COLE, KURVA and
MIKE (all 17) plan to go (a bit of a cliché) camping.
they plan to meet at Cole's house.

Rachel's mother died when rachel was just a baby because her father
killed her. her dad go put away into a mental institution... HE
ESCAPES. the police warn Rachel's aunt and uncle (who she currently
lives with) and they don't seem bothered (mainly because they like
their privacy) the police then tell rachel. she says that her dad is
not insane but her aunt pushed him over the edge.

SO, its the day of the camping trip. kurvas mum and step dad are going
on holiday for a few days. when they leave, kurva hears a noise,
thinking its her mum to pick up something she forgot, she takes no
notice. when she looks up she sees a man (its rachels dad - she knows
because earlier in the film they see a newspaper article about him)
behind her in the mirror... he kidnaps her. he steals her phone and
texts rachel saying she will meet them at the clearing where they will
camp.

at the clearing... they get another text from kurva saying 'be there
soon.'
it gets dark and kurva still isn't there so they think that she isn't
coming. during the night rachel wakes up due to needing the toilet.
she gets out of the tent and on the floor is jad, cole, mike and kurva
all knocked out. the man hits rachel with a baseball bat and she falls
to the floor.

when the group wake up they are in a room completely sealed off (apart
from to get around the rest of the cottage). on the wall in front of
them is a letter:
'dear you lot. we're gonna play a game. whoever is the last alive gets
to live... maybe. untie yourselves and have fun. see you soon.'

the things that happen in the cottage is pretty freaky... i dnt know
what will happen yet.
the order of death is:
COLE,
MIKE,
JAD.

kurva and rachel bump into each other in the living room and try to
figure out what to do. Rachel's dad walks in. they plead for him to
tell them what is going on. the twist at the end of the film is.......

He killed Rachel's mum because she cheated on him and got pregnant
with another man - kurvas dad. he admits that he is so full of rage
about what his wife did to him that he killed her and went completely
insane.
they ask why he's doing it to them and has killed all of their friends
and he says 'i told you i was insane.' he then walks over to rachel
and hugs her. but... he stabs her during the hug. he then looks at
kurva and smiles. the smile on his face will be insane and quite
disturbing.

IDEAS? SUGGESTIONS? PLOT HOLES THAT NEED FIXING? thankyou -x-
it's not gonna be gory btw.

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